Feed the fish Evaluation

Feed the fish Evaluation

What went well:
- I think we made out video humorous and entertaining to the audience well ,with the over dramatic music, the fast cutting and acting.
 -The music was a well know piece for horror. It is clearly over dramatic as all the character is doing is walking up the stairs, this works really well as it fits with idea we were going for
 -The flash back was well done using a handheld POV angle, its good to the audience as there not too sure what is going on, but creates the effect of it being chaotic
- this then gives more meaning to "feed the fish" than just a boring literal meaning  and also having the dramatic music and sound stop suddenly when the flashback ended continues the funny effect to the audience
 - the cuts when person A and person B are talking are done well as it starts getting more ast paced than the build up showing to the audience that were past the beginning

What to improve:
 - The cutting when she is walking into the school and up the stairs I think took a bit too long, they were effective angles but it was very slow to build up, so could improve on that
 - The lighting at the point when person a and person b are talking at some points you cant see them as there is too much back light